Observation haikus
May 25, 2007
Its been a good while since I’ve tried my hand at haiku but the challenge offered by One Deep Breath is too irresistible on this bright day.
1
Blending with background
a moth hidden in shadow
sunshine trickling through
2
A squirrel descends
robbing my feeder again
sighing, birds scatter
May 26, 2007 at 11:46 am
I like the unexpected image, albeit slight, movement of the observer ’sighing’ and then the big movement of the birds scatterring.
– susan t.
May 26, 2007 at 11:49 am
(corrected post) I like the unexpected image (albeit a slight movement) of the observer sighing and the big movement of the birds scattering.
– susan t.