Observation haikus

May 25, 2007

 Its been a good while since I’ve tried my hand at haiku but the challenge offered by One Deep Breath is too irresistible on this bright day.

1

Blending with background

a moth hidden in shadow

sunshine trickling through

2

 A squirrel descends

robbing my feeder again

sighing, birds scatter

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2 Responses to “Observation haikus”

  1. susan t Says:

    I like the unexpected image, albeit slight, movement of the observer ‘sighing’ and then the big movement of the birds scatterring.

    — susan t.

  2. susan t Says:

    (corrected post) I like the unexpected image (albeit a slight movement) of the observer sighing and the big movement of the birds scattering.

    — susan t.


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